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文章 1

原文: Table [I] compares [the] [variegated data between] before and after IL-28 was [administrated] [by intravenous [drip] infusion to the rats].

エディット後: Table 1 compares various parameters measured before and after IL-28 was administered to the 3 groups of rats by intravenous infusion.

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文章 2

原文: After [the treatment] [[with] 20 mg / min for [one hour] of [IL-18]] there was a [considerable] increase of [fasting plasma sugar (FPS)], [immune reactive insulin (IRI)] did not show a statistically significant change[, however].

エディット後: After infusion of IL-28 at 20 mg / min for 1h, there was a significant increase of fasting plasma glucose in groups A and B (Both p<0.001), but immuno reactive insulin did not show a significant change.

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文章 3

原文: [Moreover], [as seen in Figure 1,] a [profound decline was noted] [in the blood level of C-peptide] after [30 mins], but [this same change at 60-min was not also detected].

エディット後: In addition, there was a significant decrease of the serum C-peptide level in all 3 groups after 20 min, but not after 60 min (Fig.1).

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